Hyperbola Lady

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One vision

To dream’s potential

An agonizing expansion

Forlorn void moans

Creeks and squeaks

Yet is not weak

Eye for hyperbola repeal

Everything she is

Is him uniformly

His nature being

Only she can design

Opposite the homely one

Her touch paints beauty

His rugged paws

Scared in battle

Sanded through time’s glass

Where is his dream

Such a heart has sailed

Steaming out to sea

One left to pier

One syrupy reverse

One perfect storm

One taste to cherish

One idyllic love

One flash Babe

One just she.

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  1. #1 by sulekha on July 15, 2011 - 11:07 pm

    I like the way your mind curves, lovely poem. Like the sound of ‘One syrupy reverse’, BTW go see my blog ,You have been awarded here…

    • #2 by charlie nitric on July 15, 2011 - 11:13 pm

      Hi Sulekha –

      Oh how I wish my mind was straight and narrow but then again, I would be so boring huh? LOL. Hmmm I was at your blog yesterday I believe. I’ll go back again GOSH you’re sooooooo demanding, lol 😉 :).

  2. #3 by Dangerous Linda on July 16, 2011 - 1:44 am

    i hate it when a handsome hunk is way deeper than me …..

    • #4 by charlie nitric on July 16, 2011 - 9:17 am

      Hey Linda –

      Surely, YOU are more dangerous than your infamous ID spells out ;). And please don’t be hatin’ on me like that :).

  3. #5 by Mantra Lotus on July 16, 2011 - 6:52 am

    Awesome Acceptance Charlie! Humility and the sweetest surrendering. This is what makes true masculinity so attractive and what makes (us) girls..weak in the knees.


    • #6 by charlie nitric on July 16, 2011 - 10:40 am

      Hello Mantra –

      Ohhh weak knee girls are the best ones to surrender too. I accept that part about me, lol. I do. I’m happy you enjoy my poem. Thank you. 🙂

  4. #7 by ascendingthehills on July 16, 2011 - 6:52 am

    Very deep….a poem that has twists and turns causing the reader in her intrigue to draw deeper into it. Beautiful Charlie 🙂 I loved the challenge and the fruit it bore was bitter sweet!

    • #8 by charlie nitric on July 16, 2011 - 10:35 am

      Hi Jessica –

      I’m glad you are intrigued by my poem and thank you for the kind words. Bitter sweet….some things in life are just that, huh? Just about everything is bitter sweet for me, lol. 🙂

  5. #9 by melissa on July 16, 2011 - 9:09 am

    Who is she? 😛

  6. #11 by He Said on July 16, 2011 - 11:06 am

    Strength in Weakness Charlie 🙂

    • #12 by charlie nitric on July 17, 2011 - 10:16 am

      Hi He Said –

      Si! When we are most vulnerable can be our finest hour. 🙂

  7. #13 by Alpana Jaiswal on July 17, 2011 - 5:09 am

    It’s so easy, To think about Love, To Talk about Love, To wish for Love, But it’s not always easy, To recognize Love, Even when we hold it…. In our hands….After a long time Charlie..good to see you back..

    • #14 by charlie nitric on July 17, 2011 - 10:29 am

      Hi Alpana –

      I’m around but not writing much right now. I should say, not saving or posting much right now really. I’m writing but not liking what I write. Garbage bin until the next day’s mess rolls off my fingertips, lol. Thank you for commenting. I thought you were gone also. 🙂

  8. #15 by sancheeta biswas on July 17, 2011 - 5:57 am

    you are an one man army who loves to occupy the whole battle field and conquer the mind of a beauty to swap her away and mend her in his deep flow of intricate emotions.

    • #16 by charlie nitric on July 17, 2011 - 10:32 am

      Hi Sancheeta –

      That’s funny that you say that about being a one man army. I’ve heard similar things in the past but never was fully sure what people meant by that; good or bad. Finally, I just stopped thinking about it hahaha. Too many emotions here within me and I usually roll alone. 🙂

  9. #17 by rimly on July 19, 2011 - 3:40 am

    Deep, very deep Charlie! I loved the last lines “One idyllic love, One flash Babe, One just she. Good to see you around. Miss reading your posts.


    • #18 by charlie nitric on July 19, 2011 - 10:41 am

      Hi Rimly –

      I wondered if very many people understood what I mean by “one flash babe”? I thought it was a thought-provoking sequence. I’m around but just not hanging around facebook as much as before. I get so bored with facebook. No one talks there and lots of distracting non-sense, lol. Good to see you also Rimly. 🙂

  10. #19 by Cinema Profound on July 25, 2011 - 3:20 pm

    Normally, I find poetry BORING, but this is a moving exception. Is there anything you can’t write?! <3333!!!!!

    • #20 by charlie nitric on July 25, 2011 - 4:07 pm

      Hi Sidney –

      I’m really glad you like my poem and moved by it. That’s nice for me to hear so thank you for that. 🙂

  11. #21 by tattoodevil13 on August 2, 2011 - 3:45 am

    The reason I never like poetry is I have to think so hard to understand it….. Ok we have established I’m a lazy reader. Anyway r u trying to say there’s only one love in life or shes already been and gone. Or have I totally missed the meaning altogether?? Lol

    • #22 by charlie nitric on August 3, 2011 - 12:26 pm

      Hi Quinn –

      The poem is about a girl I once liked and she was trouble. We never got together for much; once lunch was all. She’s never was and never will be, lol. So that’s it. 🙂

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