by Charlie Nitric (2005)

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Opiate Shimmering Eyes

Odeum Princess Electrifies

Outlandish Appeal Signifies

Ocean of Beauty Magnifies

Omelet of Culture Dignifies

Oriflamme of My Spirit

Onager of Life Soul

Osmotic Her Aura

Omega Woman She

Orbit This One I Will

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  1. #1 by simran kaur on June 30, 2011 - 10:02 am

    Amazing, Charlie! How you managed in such a wonderful way the usage of ”O” and superb rhyme..Brillient indeed! πŸ™‚

    • #2 by charlie nitric on June 30, 2011 - 10:12 am

      Hello Simran –

      WOW thank you so much for your support and kind words. I really appreciate hearing you say this and thank you for reading me. πŸ™‚

  2. #3 by TJLubrano on June 30, 2011 - 10:14 am

    Awesome πŸ˜€ I had to laugh when I read omelet ^_^ hehe. Love the flow of this poem.

    • #4 by charlie nitric on June 30, 2011 - 10:19 am

      Hello Miss Sahara –

      Oh how nice to see you’re among the well and thriving ;). I like this poem also and omelets are my favorite, for real. I love them. Thank you for your nice words regarding my poem πŸ™‚

  3. #5 by Corinne Rodrigues on June 30, 2011 - 10:25 am

    OMG! Good one Charlie and I completely get the omelet. Far better than the Oriflame!

    • #6 by charlie nitric on June 30, 2011 - 12:09 pm

      Hi Corinne –

      I’m glad you enjoy my poem and omelets are the best ;).

  4. #7 by Yogasavy on June 30, 2011 - 10:43 am

    Oh my hidden talent! That is about all the ‘O’ I know…. I had to go look up Onager

    • #8 by charlie nitric on June 30, 2011 - 12:11 pm

      Hey Yoga –

      First off, so nice to see you back…so welcome home ^5. I’m glad you like my poem. As you’ve noticed, I spend most of my time writing funny stories about real life situations but…once in a while I will dive in to poetry. My dabble thing here :P.

  5. #9 by sulekha on June 30, 2011 - 10:52 am

    Outstanding poem by a talented writer who is obsessed with the alphabet “O”….OMG

    • #10 by charlie nitric on June 30, 2011 - 12:12 pm

      Hi Sulukha –

      “Outstanding” are nice words for me to hear from you. Thank you for that compliment. “O”s every where, lol. Cool, huh! πŸ™‚

  6. #11 by jaysquires on June 30, 2011 - 11:17 am

    Part of me wants to say, your shaped poem has small hips, large bust… but that’s only part of me, the part of me that can’t pass up the easy observation. The other part of me (or, at least, the larger part of me) is awed by the depth and beauty of your poem. I particularly enjoyed the internal rhythm, the subtle release from the “of” in the middle section into the imbalance of the final three lines. Yes, and omelet — I agree — is a delicious touch. It reminds me (don’t ask me why the reminder) of John Donne’s “The Flea.” Thanks for sharing.


    • #12 by charlie nitric on June 30, 2011 - 12:15 pm

      Hi Jay –

      Let me put it to you this way, Jay. Much of your assessment is accurate with one big exception; up top part. That’s would never ever be a deal breaker for me. By the way, this girl was never my girlfriend or anything like that. Thank you for reading me and for commenting. πŸ™‚

  7. #13 by sancheeta biswas on June 30, 2011 - 11:23 am

    i wonder who is she? she made you a poet. you are different, not the charlie i know of, your this side is strikingly supersonic.

    loved the poem.

    • #14 by charlie nitric on June 30, 2011 - 12:26 pm

      Hi Sancheeta –

      Just a single mother whom crossed my path at a point in my life a few years ago. We didn’t have anything together but more like a brief verbal relationship and attraction. I discovered later that she had a fiance and lived with him. I’m grateful we never interacted intimately what so ever. πŸ™‚

  8. #15 by Rhyme Me a Smile on June 30, 2011 - 12:05 pm

    What poetic talent! All the O’s and rhyme?! Bravo.

    • #16 by charlie nitric on June 30, 2011 - 12:27 pm

      Hi Rachel –

      I’m glad you read my poem and enjoy it. I know how much you adore poetry and often, my poems are similar to yours as far as humor, simplicity, and easy flowing read to it. This poem however, has much hidden depth and sometimes I do these sorts of poems as well. πŸ™‚

  9. #17 by rimly on June 30, 2011 - 12:25 pm

    You are one bundle of talent Charlie Nitric!

    • #18 by charlie nitric on June 30, 2011 - 1:04 pm

      Hey Rimly –

      I’m smiling now. It really Really makes me very happy to hear you say those nice complimentary words to me. I appreciate that a lot. πŸ™‚

  10. #19 by jimshuJimshu on June 30, 2011 - 3:40 pm

    That poem Charlie is surprisingly shaped like a beer glass. How many before you could write that?

    • #20 by charlie nitric on July 3, 2011 - 1:08 pm

      Hi Jim –

      The shape does have some symbolism to it but non-related to a beer glass. πŸ™‚

  11. #21 by The Happiness Group on June 30, 2011 - 4:56 pm

    Lovely sentiment…beautifully expressed!

    Keep dabbling!

    • #22 by charlie nitric on June 30, 2011 - 7:13 pm

      Hello Happiness –

      Thank you very much and hope my poem made you – Happy! πŸ™‚

  12. #23 by melissa on July 1, 2011 - 12:38 am

    I saw you’ve written it in 2005 and you’ve always been a good and funny writer. Admirable… I also read the comments and have gathered a few thoughts :)…

    Wonderful Os…:)

    • #24 by charlie nitric on July 1, 2011 - 3:23 am

      Cool, thanks for your kind words Melissa. Scary though,,,,,,you, having a few thoughts and all. Sounds dangerous to me :P.

  13. #25 by kriti on July 1, 2011 - 1:11 am

    You have me all wide eyed with wonder – Brilliant Charlie!

    • #26 by charlie nitric on July 1, 2011 - 3:27 am

      Hello Kriti –

      Thank you for the compliment Kriti….my wide-eyed poetic friend filled with wonder ;). I hope you enjoy reading it. πŸ™‚

  14. #27 by askcherlock on July 2, 2011 - 2:33 pm

    Just an amazing poem, Charlie! Loved this. πŸ™‚

    • #28 by charlie nitric on July 2, 2011 - 3:57 pm

      HiYa Cher –

      I’m very glad you like my poem Cher and I hope to post a new one soon. Thanks for your kind words…means a lot so TY for that! πŸ™‚

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