Mesmerizing Desire
by Charlie Nitric
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Obdurate Melancholy
In Chocolate Marble Orbs
An Angel Beams
Strikingly Shimmering
Is the blaze
Of her Spectacle
Smile to My Pump
So Sightless a Buck
Spontaneous Processes
Cease a Bashful Deer
Unaided Motionless
A Proud Path
Of this Lonely
Mesmerizing Desire
Charlie Nitric 
#1 by bornstoryteller on July 3, 2011 - 12:18 pm
you killed Bambi!!!! waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
#2 by charlie nitric on July 3, 2011 - 12:25 pm
Hey Stuart –
Bambi, huh?
#3 by rimly on July 3, 2011 - 12:24 pm
Hello poet, you amaze me every time.
http://rimlybezbaruah.blogspot.com/2011/07/darkness-in-her.html
#4 by charlie nitric on July 3, 2011 - 12:28 pm
Hello Rimly –
Thank you for your nice words and for reading me. 🙂
#5 by charlie nitric on July 3, 2011 - 12:28 pm
Hello Rimly –
Thank you for your nice words and for reading me. 🙂
#6 by Debbie on July 3, 2011 - 12:27 pm
A Proud Path
Of this Lonely
Mesmerizing Desire – loved those lines
#7 by charlie nitric on July 3, 2011 - 12:30 pm
Hello Debbie –
Thank you so much. I felt that it was a cool way to pop off a close to a poem I really enjoyed writing. 🙂
#8 by Neneng Tarigan on July 3, 2011 - 12:59 pm
As usual…Word press is the most efficient in posting the stories, but you are still capable to have made the appearance even better!
#9 by charlie nitric on July 3, 2011 - 1:04 pm
Hello Neneng –
Thank you so much for reading my poem. 🙂
#10 by ascendingthehills on July 3, 2011 - 11:08 pm
Loved it! 🙂 I love watching deer in the fields by us, beautiful..proud creatures 🙂
#11 by charlie nitric on July 4, 2011 - 12:31 am
Hi Jessica –
Yes I agree. Deer are fantastic, beautiful creatures. The wild and graceful animals work well in my brief human relationship poem; the male (buck) and female (doe). Happy Firecracker Day and Be Safe. 🙂
#12 by kriti on July 4, 2011 - 6:28 am
Don’t get God’s justice in this! Why do these poor creatures have to freeze in headlights : ((?? Lovely work though Charlie!
#13 by charlie nitric on July 5, 2011 - 8:55 am
Hello Kriti –
Awe thank you so much Kriti. I appreciate your kind words a lot. 🙂