Mesmerizing Desire


Mesmerizing Desire

 by Charlie Nitric

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 Obdurate Melancholy

In Chocolate Marble Orbs

An Angel Beams

Strikingly Shimmering

Is the blaze

Of her Spectacle

Smile to My Pump

So Sightless a Buck

Spontaneous Processes

Cease a Bashful Deer

Unaided Motionless

A Proud Path

Of this Lonely

Mesmerizing Desire

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  1. #1 by bornstoryteller on July 3, 2011 - 12:18 pm

    you killed Bambi!!!! waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

    • #2 by charlie nitric on July 3, 2011 - 12:25 pm

      Hey Stuart –

      Bambi, huh?

  2. #3 by rimly on July 3, 2011 - 12:24 pm

    Hello poet, you amaze me every time.

    http://rimlybezbaruah.blogspot.com/2011/07/darkness-in-her.html

    • #4 by charlie nitric on July 3, 2011 - 12:28 pm

      Hello Rimly –

      Thank you for your nice words and for reading me. 🙂

    • #5 by charlie nitric on July 3, 2011 - 12:28 pm

      Hello Rimly –

      Thank you for your nice words and for reading me. 🙂

  3. #6 by Debbie on July 3, 2011 - 12:27 pm

    A Proud Path

    Of this Lonely

    Mesmerizing Desire – loved those lines

    • #7 by charlie nitric on July 3, 2011 - 12:30 pm

      Hello Debbie –

      Thank you so much. I felt that it was a cool way to pop off a close to a poem I really enjoyed writing. 🙂

  4. #8 by Neneng Tarigan on July 3, 2011 - 12:59 pm

    As usual…Word press is the most efficient in posting the stories, but you are still capable to have made the appearance even better!

    • #9 by charlie nitric on July 3, 2011 - 1:04 pm

      Hello Neneng –

      Thank you so much for reading my poem. 🙂

  5. #10 by ascendingthehills on July 3, 2011 - 11:08 pm

    Loved it! 🙂 I love watching deer in the fields by us, beautiful..proud creatures 🙂

    • #11 by charlie nitric on July 4, 2011 - 12:31 am

      Hi Jessica –

      Yes I agree. Deer are fantastic, beautiful creatures. The wild and graceful animals work well in my brief human relationship poem; the male (buck) and female (doe). Happy Firecracker Day and Be Safe. 🙂

  6. #12 by kriti on July 4, 2011 - 6:28 am

    Don’t get God’s justice in this! Why do these poor creatures have to freeze in headlights : ((?? Lovely work though Charlie!

    • #13 by charlie nitric on July 5, 2011 - 8:55 am

      Hello Kriti –

      Awe thank you so much Kriti. I appreciate your kind words a lot. 🙂

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